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Twilight

Shadows in twilight turned to black and white
Inside the house looking out of the window down the street
Waiting impatiently for her future to drive up the driveway

An arched back stretches to infinity
Kneeling over the love-seat with circumventing thoughts
To not spoil the reality of what's to be

Half-naked half-clothed feminine beauty
Waiting for time to start moving once again
And experience love for the first time

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  • JinSays gold member
    July 16
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    Beautiful, thank you.
    Love,
    jin

  • A lovely piece expressing hope and beautiful sentiment. Keep moving to form a dance that swirls melodic enchantment around every waking hour

  • Wow..it is just a warm beauty shown in the words..and love is emerged out of it..wonderful poetry dear friend..thanks for sharing...