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Nothing

i see you with all those girls
A different one every night
you bring them home
and lay them down
to make love to them
in the bed that WE share
you dont think i notice
when i go out of town
what do you want from me?
i sit here on the bed
while you scream
saying you didnt do those awful things
buts i know your games
i was once the prize
but now in your eyes
i'm nothing
So no i wont sleep in this bed
A bed of lies
you can yell
you can scream
so tell me
who's nothing now
dont come around
saying your sorry
cause daddy will show you
just how sorry you'll be
run away and dont come back
i wont bother me
cause nothing means nothing
when i look back
your nothing to me
i wont look back

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7. no i wont sleep in this bed of lies

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  • Tqop
    July 21

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    OMG. I love Matchbox 20 Is that song from Matchbox20. AHHHH. I love them. Great job on this poem.

    • Ahh :-p lol

      OMG lol i love them toooo, there amazing. but i dont think that song is by them. and thanks

  • Raw write.

    Amazing usage of the prompt. I loved it. You captured an emotion hard to relieve and you did it using a beautiful flow...very blunt. I really loved it. My only suggestion is you watch your capitalizations on your I's. Other than that great job hun

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