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Signatures



In all the hours that hands have to hold,
we write our heart's ink through many ways,
leaving messages upon those we meet,
who see the handwriting and know
what language we truly used
no matter what we thought we said.

It might come in dark stains of expression,
the pain and sadness that flowed too often
or it might have a claret hue from our passions,
nearly glowing as it drips on another.

Perhaps it appears with love’s sapphire tint
having a warmth in the words,
which no one can forget.

Whatever is the signature we use
conveying the core of the fruit
grown within our lives,
it will be the image most remembered,
a grave marker created by what we penned
by the seeds that dwelled inside,
hopefully it will be more apples than lemons
cherished for a flavor that brought some sweet memories
instead of sour thoughts that become so bitter.

Author notes

prompt:
http://sketchydreamer.deviantart.com/art/Apples-for-the-Dead-120262882

name: p e n m a n

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Comments

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  • cybilseyes silver member
    July 5

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    This was one of those pieces, pokes at my ribs a playful jab, that makes me think.. I love where you went with this prompt thanks so much!
    xo
    Cyb

  • Wonderful imagery Well you have certainly brought your readers, including me, more apples than lemons
    Such a creative write on the picture.
    Best wishes with this


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 3

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    Most thought provoking write, brother...What our hands have written gives the true impression of what is in our heart....Enjoyable write


  • Ez Writer silver member
    July 3

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    This is an exceptionally awe inspiring write !
    Delightfully mesmerizing throughout a very
    evocative read - indeed ...
    Best regards , Friend Easy


  • Ann45 gold member
    July 3
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    Very Nice. Good Luck in the contest xx


  • maralisa silver member
    July 3
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    a fantastic write my brother I love this good luck inthe contest maralisa

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