I'm I blind to whats really there?
Trying to decide whats turely fair.
Should I end it with my soulmate?
Should I say a simple sorry is to late?
My mind spins out of control,
This happiness I've found I don't want to blow.
I would be lost without you,
I don't want these lies to be true.
Some how some way i'll always remember the day we met,
Now my hearts tied into a unwinable bet.
These thoughts pull me away,
Now i find it harder and harder to stay.
it would destroy me to say goodbye,
please just hold me while i cry.
So many guys so many tears,
Still yet you always whipe away my fears.
I'm questioning our wedding bands,
Forgetting our inportant plans.
i want so much and yet the hope is gone,
All because you keep doing all the things wrong.
A simple fairytale gone bad,
Its so ture yet so sad...
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by alex brooks
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turely fair.
The above is the first thing I noticed there are more glaring mistakes through the piece.
I may sound like an ogre to you but honestly it costs nothing but a little time to spell check. -
It seems like we all have a story that goes with this. Amazing job putting it into words. You are a wonderful poet. Keep it up.
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Ah..sometimes you are not knowing the truth..and things goes beyond to your control..and this makes the heart anguish..very deep poetry ..well done...
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Very nice piece, 2 thumbs up!!
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