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Wolf in Sheep's Clothing









Lost is the sound
of breaking hearts,
in a hollow existence.

Beating in murmurs
of blue, against a
crying sky.

Grounded in a meaningless
life, where mere mortals
sip of pleasures disgust.

Calling goes unfulfilled,
when trust dies,
and faith lies dormant.

Ones wings insignificant,
in a world where all
wear sleeved sentiment.

And lustful eyes
wear sin again
in the cloth of lambs.












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By Celticmoon


Sinful Eyes

Piercing raven eyes

Set blazing carnal flames forth

Freeing sinful wants


I knew this was for Blaze and had to write from it.

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  • B Chandler
    July 17
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  • The imagery here is breathtaking...Be very so grateful for such a great talent as this that touches the soul of us all....SIGH..........


  • DogFish silver member
    July 4

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    "Beating in murmurs
    of blue, against a
    crying sky..."

    I'm with, Wanda, that is as beautiful as it is melancholy!


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 4

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    Sighhh..."against a crying sky"...Only you...& maybe Stevie Ray Vaughn can elicit such a sense of the blues with but a single phrase, dear Scribe. Belle will adore this piece, my beloved Scarecrow. I know I do. Wanderer



  • Ah..you have so imaginately described the truth of this life with its poetic definations..well said poetry my friend..wonderful impact..


  • Rowan gold member
    July 3

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    I adore that last line...
    yeah. If only we knew how long we had to make a difference, no? I liked this very much.

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