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heat

Waiting by the windows edge for your return

imagining the sight of you within each fantasy

lace intwined around the lingering desire's yearn

explict thoughts coating my bare and exposed body

Eyes tracing every inch of rich nakedness

In need of satisfaction from your masculinity

Hand grazing against my skin body bearing witness

Unable to deny the wanting for you in my throbbing pussy

Feeling you pushing through the narrowness

Inviting yourself further into my entrance slowly

Stirring my desire with your head’s thickness

As your presence consumes the core of my body

Each stroke submerging itself deeper into the wetness

Bound by the feel of you occupying the vacancy

Harmonious rhythm of pleasure flowing endless

Succumbing to the flame burning within me

Gasping for air though left breathless

Chills radiating throughout entangled in the intimacy

Internal blaze igniting an explosion of bliss

Trapped within the midst of pure ecstasy

Enthralled by the heat of this bittersweet lust

though illusions only existing within  the mind of me

waiting by the windows edge for the fulfillment of us

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  • JinSays gold member
    July 16
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    thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, and Im wishing you all the best.
    Love,
    jin


  • Amber Lee
    July 3
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    Amazing write!