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Whells Of hell

Trees passing by,
Hoping to fly,

Stinging rain,
Hurt with pain.

Icey winds,
Together blends.

Leaving the past,
Terrifying crash.

Satans hate,
Gleaming with fate.

Bones crush,
Flesh turned into mush.

Souls that lift,
Thought it all was a myth.

Judging lives,
Fire pries.

Deep in sin,
Signing my life away with a pen.

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  • Kristen Kay
    July 4
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    Ohh I like

    Forth stanza "Satan's" I love this poem it so ohh dark I love it .


  • WuzGood
    July 3
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    very nice, i like the feeling and the rhyming is great!! good work