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Today

Trapped in an Abyss of Worry I fall averse to society..
If today i was to die i'd feel no anxiety....
I feel so lost just led astray..
I turn to drugs to take me away.....

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    July 4
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I like what you have done with a short amount of words, my only criticism is that you have too many '...' I think it ruins the effect given when used so much. Other than that, nice write. Welcome to the site, if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
    Laura,
    Site-greeter.

  • Amir11
    July 4
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    srry m8s

    i don't really do drugs....