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Beaches

 
 
Steps on heart’s sand
never forgotten
by lifeguards or trespassers,
saving or scaring.

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Footprints in the sand

A contest entry

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  • Snowbear gold member
    July 4

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    Congratulations on the bronze!

    That was interesting, I got a great image of how different people touch us in different ways. Excellent take on the prompt!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 4

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    Excellent and so very true! Whatever the footprint. they all leave an impression.
    Congrats on your trophy


  • Ann45 gold member
    July 3
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    Interesting

    thoughtful


  • maralisa silver member
    July 3

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    aw a fantastic write for the promt my brother I love this congratulations on your shinymaralisa


  • j i n gold member
    July 3

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    scaring...that doesnt leave much wiggle room William. I wish you the best in the contest.
    Love,
    jin


  • islekine silver member
    July 3
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    Very creative take!

    Thanks so much for entering! Best wishes always!

    and

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 3

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    This is a great take on the prompt as always well done you are good at these fast ones best to you always be well.


  • Scyphon
    July 3

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    An interesting view on the prompt
    taken with the lifeguard and perils
    thank you for sharing, take care and be well

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