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my rain free write

my hair soaked in wetness
my clothes drenched
the smell so natural
the view so beautiful
the sound so calming
the cars making splashe
my tears hidden by the skies shower
little girls dancing under they're umbrellas
rain don't go away
stay every day

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  • AwesomeJoshsome
    July 7

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    It captures the cleanliness that I feel after rain sooo very well. Everything feels renewed, THAT is the reason why I love being out in the rain and I love this poem about rain!!