Hey fella, yes you
glaring back at me
You're doing me wrong
Gotta change , gotta
shuck your wanton ways
if you want to stay
a partner with me
I am not kidding
Had enough of your stuff
You better behave
or you'll rue that snide smile.
In a list
A contest entry
- ...Man in the Mirror... by Desire.
1221 points, ended July 7, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Man In The Mirror
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
Woven Strengths: While reading this verse- I kept seeing Keifer Sutherland looking in a mirror - and snippet from the movie: Mirrors~
I am shown an image from the movie: Stay Alive when Hutch looks in the mirror and his eyes change and the mirror cracks For some reason I am shown John Wayne on horseback Also shown a snippet from The Matrix-
shown Neo~ I'm being shown notation of expanding horizons- brave the frontier and go where no Man has gone before- shown Quill-
and ink spilled on papyrus~ but Your words written beyond borders
Love the direction You took with this prompt
Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
shuck your wanton ways
if you want to stay
a partner with me
Vivid Imagery poured in these lines...
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too 
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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