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oh, july

a soft creamy orange
cradles my eyes,
warms my skin

a gentle breeze
kisses my cheeks,
tickles my toes

a bird chirping;
singing a gentle melody
just for me

the air is crisp and clean;
the cool of the morning rain
softly lingers in the shadows

soon i'll have to leave
this perfect oasis
and welcome august

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  • Isn't "Oh July" a song by the Decemberists?

    • i looked it up, and it's apparently called July, July!
      i don't have it though.
      it's on an album i do not have. haha