Connected to Universe,
love, compassion, must
come first
Content, still alive,
in Harmony we'll
survive...
Author notes
15 words
A contest entry
- Say It In Fifteen Words by piccola.
900 points, ended July 26, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice job; thank you for entering. Wouldn't it be lovely if we could all live in peace and love and in harmony?
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A good message for anyone who reads
this and I also like the rhyme scheme you
used in this write..good luck!
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I like the rhyme scheme here and the line arrangement. Enjoyed your write.
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there is a lot here in these short verses, the riddle of the ages : how something so simple as the idea of love for one another, becomes so difficult in everyday life, excellent...PK
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Superb!
I love this. You did a fantastic job of portraying such intense feeling in just a mere fifteen words. I was pleased by what I felt when I read, then reread this piece. Great job and best of luck in the contest. ~Gypsy~
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Thanks so much...
Being connected to the Universe is my goal...
I pray to the everything...the whole ...the cosmos..
Thanks for commenting and applause!
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