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Piccola the clown

Missing image
Nose bright red,
hair unkempt upon her head.
Ill-fitting shirt
her sad eyes show hurt.

A contest entry

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  • meena krish
    July 16
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    I like what your wrote for this picture.
    Its well expressed..best of luck in the
    contest


    • Shenton silver member
      July 16
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      Meena

      Thankyou for your complimentary comments, your good wishes, and your applause.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton

  • poets whisper silver member
    July 15
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    This is supposed to be a rendering of the famous clown Pierrot ... I stumbled across it on Deviantart. How often clowns have sad eyes ... Showing the reality I suppose.
    I miscounted the first time ... but woe is me; ill-fitting is one word so you win

    nice job with the prompt.


    • Shenton silver member
      July 15
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      P W

      Thankyou for your comments and for re-counting.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton

  • Judith Chandler
    July 8
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    Good take on the clown picture.


    • Shenton silver member
      July 16
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      Judith

      Thankyou for your comment, and for your most generous applause.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton

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