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I Am Yours !

I look into your eyes

and I see the peace of your

   inner soul,

cascading joy from their brilliance,

   so beautiful, so bold.

 

 

I kiss your lips

and the nectar drips

  into my heart,

willing me to surrender completely

  and from you never to depart.

 

 

I wrap myself into your powerful arms

and they embrace my essence

  so gloriously tight,

locking me in the confines of sweet dreams,

   all through the night.

 

 

I whisper in your ear

and love's melody reverberates

  its sweet sound in sync,

with the oceans of desires

 rising passions to the brink.

 

 

I speak to you

and your voice returns harmony

  in a sweet pastel tone,

taking me to raptures of which

   my soul has never known.

 

 

I touch your hands

and electric waves of ecstasy

  course down my spine,

rendering me helpless, making you

   forever, for all time mine.

 

 

I walk into your soul

and thrust my desires

   deep down into your abyss,

lost to swim endlessly into

  your arms, your eyes, your kiss.

 

 

Marjorie

       Joyce

     Leslie          07/03/09

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i would make a great mother or grandmother.

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  • poetryality silver member
    July 9
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    Dearest Sister,

    This is beautiful! There is so much raw emotion shared here. I love it when true love abounds and there is nothing we can do, or want to do to stop the flooding. Your words are heartfelt and sensually written. I can see why you received the Silver Cup!

    CONGRATULATIONS!


    Always ♥

    Renee


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 6
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    Superb poetry, sensual at its best, beautifully done


  • Jayde1
    July 6

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    wow

    i loved this poem...great imagery..I touch your hands

    and electric waves of ecstasy

    course down my spine,

    i loved this part..its an amazing poem


  • Samplette gold member
    July 5

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    A stunning piece of poetry. So beautiful...true, deep love is an amazing and precious gift, we need to always treat is as such.
    Excellent writing my dear.
    Congratulations on the trophy!!
    Sa

  • Bob Fox
    July 3

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    Marjorie

    Now this is a gem. The amzing part is that it is sensual without the sex. A lost art I think. And I bow to you romantic poet. may you find such a love . Excellent.


  • halfpast4ever
    July 3
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    WOW. i loved it. every line of it sent new images in my head. thankyou and good luck.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 3

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    I love the ending of this ;poem. It really made me sigh It's also amazing how much hands can send messages. I find touching hands a very sensual experience.Maybe I'm odd
    Lovely poem and I wish you all the best with this
    Gaylene


    • queenie
      July 3
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      i love hands so we can be odd together. thamks for the support.

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