I'm feeling very empty today
Like life will never be the same
I try to think of reasons to call you
Think of what I would say
But my heart tells me it wont matter
That you wont want me anymore
Than you did yesterday
Yesterday was just and empty
As empty as today
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I like it and can totally relate. Love sucks sometimes.
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yeah it sure does...I'm off love right now lol
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This was ok the format was nice i liked the way that you laye dthe poem out sort of circular. Thank you for entering and i wsh oyu luck in your contests.
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there seem to be a lot of spelling errors here.
the last 3 lines don't make any sense. did you mean, "then what you did yesterday/made yesterday seem just as empty/as empty as today"? -
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i believe she meant than instead of then...
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you rock!
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nope you must just be reading it wrong
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Beautiful
There's not much I can say about this one I think everyone has felt this at some point or another but wonderfully expressed! Good luck!!
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