The first time he heard her
Her tiny little heartbeat
I knew he was the greatest man
That I would ever meet
He's my entire world
My reason for living
He's helped me through so much
His love keeps on giving
He's there when I need him
He's there when I call
He's there when I want him
He's there through it all
He knows my past
And he doesn't care
He looks past all I've done
He'll always be there
He wraps his arms around me
And kisses me on the forehead
In just that one little kiss
Is everything we've never said
He'll be the perfect father
To our little girl
She'll be the luckiest child
In the entire world
Author notes
he's gonna be an AMAZING father when Sophie's born!!! I love him SOOO much!!!
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Comments
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Awww, heartfelt and beautiful write. Great work, really enjoyed reading this
Thank you for your entry. Best wishes
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I especially loved stanza 5! There is something about a kiss on the forehead that says everything you have never said! Kudos to you for bringing that out! I truly liked your piece and pray that everything goes well when your little Sophie is born! I have a little Aubry on the way through my daughter in August or Sept. You know how babies are! They come when they are ready!
Back to the poem, it was heart-felt and loving as well as honest. I loved it! Best of luck in my contest and always!
Lily♥
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