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Through

Sand Storms..
Twirling, Twisting
Dare me to pass
Through
My heart and my mind
Ever forbidding me to enter
Anxiety springs
When I wonder what'll happen.
Scared of the Consequences.
Will I survive?
To make it
Through?

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