It's a dark life,
when the night draws you out.
Right and wrong - blurred,
everything gone,
nearly going mad by your side.
Saving my inner being I become
hard,
angry,
yet - patient.
The clouds in your eyes disperse,
your smile returns
and I melt...
curling into your strong arms,
back against front,
I'm safe,
secure,
loved.
Whispers of our future
caress my heart,
soothe my aching soul,
bringing euphoric peace!
When the darkness returns,
bringing trepidation, anxiety,
I'll hold on,
it will end.
You'll smile, I'll melt, Euphoria will return!
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The reason I can't walk away...
A contest entry
- Ever Time I Wind Up Back At Your Door by AllYoullNeverHave.
700 points, ended July 17, 23 entries
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Excellent
Very intense and well crafted write. So very creative and full of feelings. best of luck in the contest.
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Oh my goodness. This poem is written with such deep intense emotion... The way you have written this poem shows it comes from deep within.. Wonderful write..
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"curling into your strong arms,
back against front,
I'm safe,
secure,
loved."
Ahh... the feeling of belonging. The feeling of needing that person. The sense of a safe place. I can feel these emotions leaping from the page. I love this. Thank you for entering and best of luck.
♥AllYoullNeverHave -
You'll smile, I'll melt, Euphoria will return!
amen..and what else you need..if it happens..wonderful imagination you brought..well done..and thanks for sharing... -
this is full of frustration and want its really good i feel you you melt melt me often with your words loved it love you .
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