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Courting my mistress

I mmmmmmmm for words that slide across my tongue
And hint at things the writer can't set free
Such poetry's the only aqualung
That let's you dive in metaphor's rich sea

I sigh for rhymes that break the reader's heart
And meter that's a waterfall of sound
Philosophy quite worthy of Descartes
Or mysteries that no-one else has found

The ooohs and aaahs of others if I write
Rewards beyond the dreams of any king
Like kisses from the goddess of the night
A tune that only nightingales can sing

My mistress is the language of the bard
Made richer by the poets of the years
Her intricacies I can't disregard
Her subtleties are tissues for my tears

In words I taste the spices of the east
And revel in a courtesan's embrace
It's poetry not music tames this beast
In verse I find the universe in place



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  • As the words flow, the depth of my imagination as a reader, has a sensual warmth that touches my soul...well done...mystic

  • Macsword
    July 4

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    You know...

    this write is sort of the answer to every question I've asked over the past several comments. I find that interesting and not the least ironic.

  • WOnderfully penned.
    and mmmmmmm indeed


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