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Goodbye friends

faces finally felt down
now I can leave.
I have no regret for what I've done
I won't be again deceived

they think they've win
but I don't care about my loss
I'm looking at my gain
and how big is my prize

I now  can tell the difference
and I know who are my friends
I will watch them now from a distance
and see them how they will fall down

goodbye my friends forever
I now can go away
you released me from my emotional prison
and I don't feel any pain

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  • Tqop
    July 3
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    Why goodbye?


    • Kal-El
      July 4
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      Goodbye because I will no longer be their friend and we'll go in different pathes