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Just How Far Away

Some days I never get out of bed
The days seem to pass me by
'Cuz the nightmare i'm having
Is so much better than the life i'm living
There the world isn't quite as harsh
It isn't quite as unforgiving
The world is a little gentler
It makes loving you a little less harder
The pain seems to be fading
And the tears just the sky raining

Then reality awakes me and i realize
I begin to realize
Just how far away you are
Just how far away you are
And just how much i need you
The truth wasn't so hard to find
When i let myself realize
Just how far away, just how far away
You were

Why can't I even dream a happy dream
Where you're by my side
From you i'll always be far away, just so far away
How did i not realize
Just how far away you are
Just how far away you are
And just how much i need you
The truth wasn't so hard to find
When i let myself realize
That you were
Never there

Where do we fit in,
Are imaginary or real?
Where do we fit in,
Is there a secret to reveal?
I'm lying here in the corner, in the shadows
A little disturbed about what i'm seeing here

And i'm standing here
The world is moving faster and faster
My head is spinning
I'm becoming a disaster
Without you i'll always be so destructable
Crumbling to pieces without you
But i've realised just how far away
Just how far away you are

How did i not realize
Just how far away you were
Just how far away you were
When i begin to realize
As it slowly sinks in
that you were
Never there
So close but never there

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 4
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a very good expression of yourself here I really like the way that this poem comes together and tells a story about what is going on inside your head great write!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • Wow

    this was an intense write. My fave part was the very first stanze, because its so easy to relate to, sometimes even your nightmares can be so much better than reality. the only thing that i would suggest is when you say,
    " The pain seems to be fading
    And the tears just the sky raining" i would suggest you put the tears are just the sky raining, or another choice of words that would make this line flow easier. but other than that this was a great write, i enjoyed readin it.