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Recovery

Recovery is a battle every single day,
we fight for control every wich way.
Cravings burn from deep inside,
they fight for the power, to make us subside.
We look to each other for strength and support,
we turn to our higher power, to pray and report.
Some will make fun, and call us weak.
They will offer us a fix when times are bleak.
We have got to use our heads,
and tell them to get lost.
We need to keep our faith,
and remember the cost.
Our will keeps us strong.
Our strength gives us power.
Our faith in ourselves,
gets us through each our.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 4
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I agree with Jeremy about the last line needing to be "hour" - but other than that this was an excellent poem I really like the way that this has a great rhythm and shows your devotion so clearly well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    July 4

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    One minor glitch...OUR needs to be HOUR...I am a recovering alcoholic, so I know this one all too well. It takes one day at a time!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! If you have any questions, feel free to ask!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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