In your arms nothing can hurt me
My protector
My knight in shining armour
My heart was broken
But you stayed by my bedside
My saviour
When your cut
I bleed
When your sad
I cry
Nothing apart
Everything together
You are my best friend
my love
my life
A contest entry
- In Love and Loving It! by Jaded Lily.
2000 points, ended July 9, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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beautiful!!
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Other than a few typo's (your instead of you're) this was a nice piece of love and devotion. The last stanza, though trite, is still beautiful the way you put it!
Thank you so much for entering my contest. Best of luck now and always!
Lily ♥
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Great work
A wonderful write with so much expression, a beautiful write indeed. Many blessings to you
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amen..amen..amen..you have so beautifully shared the universal touch of the love ..and the innocence of the soul of yours makes this poetry just beautiful.,.welldone...
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