Let there be:
Birds, flowers;
butterflies,
sunny days,
blue skies.
Let the wind blow,
let the trees stand,
let the children grow,
walk the land.
Let there be:
Raindrops, bumblebees;
mountain tops, great seas,
sandy beaches, rainbow skies;
sun sets, sun rise.
Let there be...
Author notes
simple words
Let there be
void of intrusion, conflict
all of nature is exactly how God intended it to be,
it has purpose, to alter God intentions create imbalance,
to simply be, let all be as it was intended
to observe, to enjoy is all that is needed.
A contest entry
- MENDING THE SACRED HOOP by maa.
999 points, ended July 19, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"Let there be light..." Nice job on the poem. It was very delightful. It was a pleasure to read.
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The many wonders of this world,simply expressed as they should be.If only everyone could share in the actual beauty of each one!
I closed my eyes after reading this and visualized each "gift" ,actually starting with the 'sunset' as it was going below the hill across the field of sunflowers.
You have a gift with words that bring forth pictures .This poem certainly did for me .Thanks for sharing...
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Lovely...
I would need to have a seraphic language to express and translate the beauty of "Let There Be", but for lack of that sublime power ~ allow me to say: This is a celestial banquet!
In respect and appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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a great joy and peacefulness invaded my physical and subtle bodies while reading your wise words ... where others use philosophical and moralizing concepts, you have the great talent and gift to show us integrated wisdom through simple yet powerful words that touch the core of our being ...
you offer all those who have ears to listen and an open heart to receive truth, the opportunity to remember that life is so much easier when the "controler" is cast aside and Divine laws and will is accepted and welcomed with joy and confidence ...
sometimes, we need to get exhausted "fighting against" all that is - in order to lose our force and surrender ...
thank you so much for these truly uplifting and empowering words offered here with so much humility ...
much love,
marion
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Excellent
Such a beautiful write. And so inspirational in its presentations and thoughts. Best of luck in the contest.
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Ah this is life at its best...Uncomplicated, serene, beautiful.
How it is meant to be.
Bravo!
Marianne
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
And if we did not have these wonderful things we would be lost indeed!
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affirmative poetry life giving truth
These are the affirmative creative forces in word form letters make words and sound moves and movement is life. Since we are created beings perpetuated by the Supreme Being we have the given gifted power to create or make our world it is evident in this poem by just the word Be anything can become Thank you so much for sharing I think I have been inspired again by thee. Peace and soul.
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Beautiful
This is a really beautiful poem, I love the simplicity of it, It really adds to Gods granduer, (i think i spelt that wrong??) great imagry, and happy emotion is shown here, love the bunnies too! great write!
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A true joy to read. I love it in it's beautiful and artistic simplicity. Great job. Best of luck in the contest. ~Gypsy~
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And He said it and it was so, well written and touching again my friend. Blessings.
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Let there be wonderful poetry like this.
simply beautiful, so much to learn from these wise words. There is nothing to do but let it be
David
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Let there be...almost spiritual words..God given...You have penned a lovely write here of rhyme and flow....All the best in the contest!
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