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Lo[st]ve


we lost it,
someone look for it,
we must find it.

what are we going to do ?

i saw it leave,
it didn't say where it was going,
only god knows where its hiding.

what can we do ?

it might never come back,
maybe its gone for good,
we lost the love.

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  • tinydarkgoddess
    September 28

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    A delicate and pretty poem. I like the simplicity although it does miss more of the depth I am looking for in this contest however. Thank you so much for entering. Best wishes!