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Into Redundancy



When that fly
Lands on her face
I will know
That she is dead

When I cry
Inside this place
I will go
To hell instead

It can't be so certain, the final curtain
It just can't be worth it, please don't unearth it
I am the hole in her life

When it's done
And she is lost
I will try
To live again

When I run
All hope is tossed
I will die
That day, my friend

It can't be so certain, the final curtain
It just can't be worth it, please don't unearth it
I am the hole in her life

Everything is redundant now!

Redundant!
Redundant!
The fly lands on me...

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Some kind of sandwich or a quiche.

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  • FalopianTube
    July 11

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    strange. i like it, though......................
    i re read it a couple of times.
    but it's... oddly entertaining