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Lonely

Lonely I'am
Happy I'm not
My heart says yes
My mind says not

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  • Gunslinger
    July 3
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    Succint

    Sometimes, indeed, less is more.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 3
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    Interesting. Short, but extremely powerful. I think we've all been there at one point or another. Welcome to AllPoetry, by the way.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • J Macabre gold member
    July 3
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    I can relate extremely...