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My Hell

Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the stroke of death falls against my heart.
It crushes me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the wicked earth that is my prison.
In pain I call your name
while death looms.
Now alone, my cry of mercy falls upon darkened eyes.

This is my Hell

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  • RazorbladeKiss14
    September 14
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    I liked it! great job!!! Thank you for entering and good luck!!!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 12

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    A very beautiful piece of dark writing that touched me deeply. Such depth to this indeed, and written very very well. Keep it up.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 3
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    Wonderfully penned. Thanks for sharing

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    Passions