Something in your eyes, something in your smile
Boy I don't know what it is but you're driving me wild
I can't let you go, though I know I've tried
To run away from this, to dissapear, to hide
Why can't I turn away from you?
What else is there for me to do
Could it be the soft way you say my name
Could it be the soothing touch that eases every pain
It's not that I want to be with you forever darling
I just couldn't live to see you with someone who's not me
It's your voice, it's your touch
More than anything baby its your love
You make me feel safe, so I can't stray from your side
There's something about you that makes me brave when I want to hide
I just can't walk away from you
No matter how hard I tried to
A contest entry
- Ever Time I Wind Up Back At Your Door by AllYoullNeverHave.
700 points, ended July 17, 23 entries
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"You make me feel safe, so I can't stray from your side
There's something about you that makes me brave when I want to hide"
^^^ I love that. ^^^
This piece fits exactly with what I was looking for. Your word choice, the imagery, the flow... it all works so well. Thanks for entering and best of luck.
♥AllYoullNeverHave
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