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Crazy

It's only pain.
I know I can take it.

The hurt that I only seem to feel.
My words that seem to have no meaning to you.
The hope that is slowly drifting away.

Through it all I can sense the disregard for your actions,
and for my love.
And still,
I'm hooked.
I know you love another, and we will never be.

Yet, my heart doesn't seem to realize.
My heart doesn't want to move on.
My heart is blind, caught between truth and love.

I'm falling for someone who won't catch me, over and over again.
So just call me crazy for enduring the pain.

But it's only pain.
I know I can take it.

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  • Amazing! The feeling of loving someone who won't love you back... I can feel the pain in my heart from reading this. Good job. Thanks for entering and best of luck.

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