You wrap your arms around me
and lean in for a kiss
fully hidden by the trees
away from the eyes
of people passing by.
Your lips are like poison
tempting me
but at the same time
casting a spell
upon my heart.
You are my forbidden fruit
like that of adam and eve
in the garden of eden.
I take one bite of your apple like lips
and I know that forever
I will see the light in your eyes.
Author notes
i think this poem is pretty self explanitory.
oh my my my
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Comments
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Thank you for your sweet entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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this is nice
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thank you for entering
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This is steamy and a fun read, but not quite the mood I was looking for from my prompt. I still enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing it with me
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Thank you for your lovely entry. I like the idea.
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no
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Lovely write. Too bad it isn't going to be judged. I love the soft feel of your words. You have a winner with or without a trophy.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Sharon
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Very sexy and sultry!
A fine piece
Wishing you all the very best in your writing endeavors! -
Sorry
No prewrites, I'm only looking for fresh writes.
I won't remove your poem but I will not read or
judge it. Please forgive me for not stating that
in the beginning
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Yes
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This is awesome,
Thanks for entering,
Good luck. -
alluring
Loved this! could really envision that apple tasting kiss! good take on the prompt. 'away from the eyes of people passing by' secretive and seductive good job. good luck thanks for entering
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i really like this
thanks so much for entering,
good luck -
this is really just so beautiful wonderful this is so full of light and love....i am sure he will just love this when he reads it
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awwww, this is really good!! i like it ((: keep writing
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yeah, it is!
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