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Twisted Manic: Frantic Tragic Life

Tragic and trembling
in a blanket of darkness
Still feeling pain
break me down
Nothing can stop it
there's nowhere to hide
from the shadows
that chase comfort
from my sleep
into chaotic dreams
and unresolved sins
resting heavy on the soul
Are those the voices
echoing inside my head
or am i talking to myself again.

Author notes

Metro by The Vincent Black Shadow

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  • musiccraze2009
    July 25
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    very good job with the prompt! I feel like this and the song go hand in hand, and it is a great poem! loved the last line!


  • The Drifter
    July 4

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    Sins are forgiven if only you believe in HIM. More often than not it is our own inability to forgive ourselves and accept HIS forgivness that is the problem.

  • mcfreeman
    July 3
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    trembling in torment

  • musiccraze2009
    July 3

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    I think I will give you Metro by The Vincent Black Shadow. If you want another prompt then do not hesitate to let me know! If not, good luck and thanks for entering!