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Native Music

Although he n'ver knew I listened
he, nature composed an opus
magical near our forest, waterfall.
While I fished contently down stream
in the calm deep appearing; still....
o'er rocks notes rolled in harmony.


Grandfather relaxed beside rivers edge
scream's of eagle songs ; blended
in rythmic tones with the flutist.
Creating steps of praise, the spirit
dancer thanked Mother Earth as her
tears flowed sweetly gifting
my nets with food plentiful.


Windspirit whispering in tutelage
little shaman I shall guide your hand
granting you wisdom of the eagle
symbol of our redskin, clan.
So from that day I penned poetry
moving mountains with mere words
running with bears, wolves
as my elders spirit now watches
over a half-breed like me.

I miss his tribal music, the river dancing!

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I still miss my Grandfather's music, and the stories
our elders told us while growing up...

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Can you picture this? I was just a kid!

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  • blessed be the elders who pass on their wisdom to us
    Bravo !
    well penned

    Blessing for you and yours

  • mcfreeman
    July 3
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    Beautiful piece...this sings!

  • Wonderful write novy. I can believe how much you miss your Grandfather, the music and the stories. Do you ever go back and visit the village. I remember talking with an Indian maiden years ago. She was a school teacher and though they no longer live in T-Pee's she still lived in a village.


    • ennovy silver member
      July 3
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      thank you for reading and yes I miss him...he was a very musical person. and yes I do visit the reservation as much as possible...I miss it....novy