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Languid, We Lay

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Slowly, he skips to my midnight-drowsy eyes,

stuttering these palms with his silent lip-synch;

adoration’s mourning moan descends upon the drape 

of my nightgown along my neck.


Swiftly, he slides to my early-rising stretch,

purring as a cat in my lap might do;

adulation’s misty murmur ascends across my spine

as I lay my books aside to gleam in rapture.


Trusting, we arch our fingers into a nascent folding,

wrapping around each other as shimmering ribbons

tightly tied upon a glistening gift.


Telling truths from our every glance,

we glide to such subtle music, forming memories 

within our hovering hands as they seek true north.


Surely, we sway to every lost beat, retrieving rhythms 

from the quiet veils of night’s eternal drift ~

twisting together, we unravel myths of martyred dreams

which will never perish beyond perusal of passion ~


our kiss becomes kindling for Winter’s keeping, 

safe from the beckoning of any storm...


 
 
 
 


 

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For my Beloved Husband  ♥
 
 
Congratulations on being in love...
and on nearing your 5th year on AP, LilyBelle.
I just passed my own 5th anniversary recently.
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Trust and Tenderness

    Trusting, we arch our fingers into a nascent folding, wrapping around each other as shimmering ribbons tightly tied upon a glistening gift. ...

    Interesting that the animated tree has been chosen to illustrate this verse as the poem itself lies outside time - atemporality without wanderlust


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    July 9

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    Even anonymously you give yourself away with your writing style. This is so well written i could have cried from the joy (and nearly did) as I read this piece that is so well written. The entire first stanza is my favorite part in this piece (as well as the entire poem! You have done a marvelous job on this love poem without it being gooey or sloppy! You have touched the heart of love because you are IN the heart of love right now. Thank you so much for entering my contest.
    Lily ♥


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 4

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    so happy i found this poem of yours tonight! sooo very beautiful, so very elegantly sensual and soft, filled with warmth and sweet moans. oh, me oh my you make me sigh, you're such a good-looking poet"!! loved the sense of warmth, the soft glow that rises from your words.... this is how all morning should open, this is how love and loving should be and be written, my friend - just like this.... sighs!!

    ~ Nicolette

  • well the pic with with is just incredible! i love it and it opens for the poem so well. the last stanza is my favorite!

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