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pre-storm electricity

singing the gathering storm
was your childish duty,
irrational glee,
that especial electricity!
it is a duty now
like moonrise
or sunset...
on these days
the trees still come alive.

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ooooh only 30 words... you should be shot!

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  • annother gold member
    July 5
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    Interesting take on the prompt. The font and background color choices make it rather difficult to read though. Anyways, best of luck.