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Revelations

I'm happy, I'm announcing...
I have seen the naked
Face of God, and it was awesome!
Heard His unfiltered Voice,
And somehow retained my sanity...
(I think!)...Therefore I am Joyful.
Scared the Hell right out of me,
When He said, "Teach Your Kids
To be collaborators, not
Saboteurs or Terrorists!"
And then He clammed up,
Wouldn't say another Word...
Well, that's not exactly Truth,
He also told me in a dream
To build a boat on the roof of
My Florida Home.... but that is
Work for another Day, hence.
Peace, Light, and Love to All,
NSB

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  • prankstar
    July 4
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    uhmmmm... in no way did this fit the guidines of my contest.