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Things we Never tell

 

With barely parted lips

You can draw the attention of a room

But you walk on oblivious…

 

You dress to impress

Swearing you dress only for yourself

Yet you could have anyone you liked…

 

I wish I could hate you

And sometimes I think I can

If I try hard enough

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



I wish I wasn't her...



 


Author notes

Prompt:

Blank Canvas

 

 

Forever our minds are blank to the ways we affect those around us, its the small movments that attract the attention.

 

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Honesty is a must...

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 12

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    Whoa. That was chilling, even if it weren't for the last line, but that last line really stunned me. It was a fantastic poem, and I don't understand why you didn't win gold with this...
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~