I am so sick
Can't you just disappear
Your love is like a cancer
spreading throughout my veins
I do not need your ulterior help
Let me fight this alone
Do not give me your fake concern
or your forced sulking
Your 'loving' words, they
only make more squeamish
and with every 'I love you'
another part of me dies
taken over by your cancerous love
You ask how to make better
Get the fuck out of my sight
The more and more you fake it
The more and more I die
Author notes
-"I'm So Sick" - Flyleaf
A l l y s o n . L a s h a e .
A contest entry
- My Ipod--A GIANT Song Prompt Contest by Nienna Calmcacil.
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this is good, but not what im looking for in this contest. sorry
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interesting write, thank you for entering
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Mmm.
Good, and I love that song.
By the way.
Very well written.
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Oh how tragic and powering. It's lovely. Wonderful write. Thank you for entering.
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hmm
Ive felt this way so many times but i guess Ive got such a low view of my own self worth i always blame it on myself and see no reason to tell them to fuck off, only to run away broken and forgotten
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wow thats really good
i've never heard the song "I'm so sick" i'm going to have to listen to it now ^^
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the song itself isnt really about it, but somehow the song title prompted me with this
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Wow...what a bitter poem. I can relate, unfortunately.
It's definitely a really different spin on "I'm So Sick." It made me think about it in quite a different light. Very thought-provoking...and cancerous love is a really powerful theme to write about.
Thank you for this entry. I'd love to read more entries of yours, if you haven't already entered two more. =] -
Wow...what a bitter poem. I can relate, unfortunately.
It's definitely a really different spin on "I'm So Sick." It made me think about it in quite a different light. Very thought-provoking...and cancerous love is a really powerful theme to write about.
Thank you for this entry. I'd love to read more entries of yours, if you haven't already entered two more. =]
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