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Strong foundations


Lay the bricks of crumbling red,
Bind them firmly with willful mortar, intent,
Fulfill the purpose.
They may strain for freedom,
Protest and crack,
But ultimately their shackles of earth hold them secure.
Secure in the knowledge that they will forever be enveloped,
Encased, in familiarity.

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  • A WISE POEM

    This was interesting, a very thoughtful poem in a artistic way. Wonderful write my friend. Welcome to all poetry. Keep up the good work. Many blessings to you.

  • Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This was an intriguing write, and I loved your imagery as well
    Well done on a great start!

    I hope that you come to enjoy this site as much as I do, and if you have any questions at all please don't hesitate to ask me!!

    Best of luck with your future writing,

    ♥ Maria
    Site Greeter ♥