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Standing together


Wiping weary eyes
I look to you in wonder
Confusion plays upon my face…


With a gentle hand
And a finger to your lips
You guide me to the lounge room window…


Standing we wait
I glance to you in askance
You shake your head and continue looking…


A flicker of light
And sleep is forgotten
We watch in wonder…


 

And you whisper...
"Remember Halley,
We've said our good-byes
But you'll continue our friendship"

Author notes

Prompt:
Halley's comet

l a d y l u l l a b y

Honesty is a must...

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  • Deadpoetic
    October 13
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    guys think girls are sl*ts

  • Bob Fox
    August 11

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    Poet

    As you grow you willfind this to be NO BIG DEAL.. and as men seek your pleasure the worm shall turn. Try to be understanding and benevolent.


  • dieu.
    July 14
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    no, sorrrryyyy.