clouds~
quatrains of a mystic,
scripted on the pristine paper sky.
sun rays~
fingers of a hymn,
telling beads on a rainbow rosary.
sea~
foam of an unrequited love,
dying
in ear rings of salt
on deaf cliffs...
Author notes
"If only to give one's own self hope-
Rain-
just enough to tease the grass."
From 'Make It Rain'
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5274737
A contest entry
- Quote Prompts II by Hetha.
1100 points, ended July 19, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is beautiful, the imagery you used to convey hope, truly deserving of the silver I see you have won.
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I really am fond of pieces, that albeit brief, paint such a vivid and descriptive picture. Even without the picture accompanying, I could form the picture in my mind clearly, and connect with the emotions intuitively. This is really lovely. I thank you for entering this contest with it.
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this is very well done, the sections combine to make a very complete scene..very well done...PK
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"sun rays~
fingers of a hymn"
aah, the music in those words! beautiful.
~ Nicolette
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unusual. I like the fingers of a hymn, telling beads.
Enjoyed your write.
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The usual kills poetry
Appreciate your stopping by to read...these floating whims
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Awesome!!
Bookmarked!! I'll be back to read this inspirational poem again!! 
Good luck in the contest!! Peace, xx Cyn xx 
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gratitude
thank you so much! gives me immense confidence.
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