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Harmony in Life



don't waste a moment
just close your eyes and listen

as the sun laughs radiance upon warm skin,
perhaps you will catch the echo of your own heart beat

if you strain hard enough, hear the ladybug
dancing her way with smooth undertones
through her own private jungle

and when the rain comes in droplets
in tune with the ticking of a clock, listen

to the sigh of the breeze whispering life into trees

or the flower bud exploding as it embraces natures gift


for if you wait,
you will miss life

and all will be silent

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Sounds of Life

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  • marlene47 silver member
    July 9

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    I like the laughing radiance, the heart beat echo, the ladybug stanza, the rhythmic rain, the sighing breeze and exploding flower - and the warning of what will be missed.
    Congratulations on the gold.
    Marlene


  • Elfin
    July 9
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    Bravo, this is a well deserved gold winner. Val


  • crivanea silver member
    July 9

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    beautiful...wow!..this is breathtaking...I can't imagine a better description for the sounds of life...love the last line..great word play..I believe you took the prompt and made it something meaningful..great story/imagery


  • Desire gold member
    July 3

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    Oh My Word~

    had to capture that moment You put into words
    Love the images this one brings and the sensations You touch upon~ Beautiful this is as are You
    Loving it~
    and can hear the sounds of life as You speak
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Draig aine gold member
    July 3
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    just a sigh and your words

    for if you wait,
    you will miss life
    and all will be silent


  • So beautiful Juls, really well written hun.

    All the best,
    mj.


  • geckogirl silver member
    July 3

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    * hug* awesome.. good luck

  • Beautifully Inspirational!!

    Best wishes in the contest!!
    Peace & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx

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