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Our Bond Remains Forever (collab: Poeticweaver)

Soft tunes releasing your heart beat,
I hear them against my cheek.
Soft sighs escape, a special treat,
that makes this flower weak.


Precious passion, my dream's complete,
let love rush through you from me.
For I'm sure blessed, with your soul sweet,
my heart strums yours sincerely.

Tender whispers upon each ear,
your the half that brings me peace.

Awakening again I feel you near,

as the burdens slowly cease.

Ups and downers, highs and then lows,
no matter stormy weather.
Through laughter, pain, or dark shadows,
our bond remains forever.

Author notes

Always wonderful to pen with the other half of my soul, Poeticweaver,
I love you my dear friend, always.

Thanks for the honor once again


I penned stanzas 1 & 3
He penned stanzas 2 & 4

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  • Knight70 silver member
    August 18

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    Beautifully written collaboration....

    Each quatrain is stunning. Each line is inundated with literary magic.

    Don


  • Eric Marsh
    August 13

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    cool

    what can i say..with these new bleedin rules my M.S prevents me from physically writing lengthy comments......but this is quite beautiful .....nuff said.....


  • RockSteady
    August 11

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    I must say reading this collaboration really forces me to want to share my soul with another. both in persdon and in pen. I can only pray that when the opportunity arises for me that the connection will be as you two have shared with us , So I thank the both of you for this beautiful pen and for the inspiration to somehow someday be as one with another. tks again.
    Don

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      August 13
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      Timothy is a lovely poet to pen with. A dear friend who I cherish always.
      Anytime you want to write a collab Don I will be honored to fill the boot


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 17

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    Wow. This was a beautiful collaboration. Amazing. It was like reading a sigh that you can hear despite a raging storm outside. Wow.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 4
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    Wonderful collab, you two...Nicely done

  • Great

    Sweet sweet music. great job guys! anotrher beautiful write Passions Bravo Well done weaver!

    All my love sweetie... not you! Rick


  • maralisa silver member
    July 3
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    aw this is beautiful thank you for sharing maralisa

  • Thanks for sharing your heart and soul entwined with my own. It's always nice to know you are loved, and having inspiration bestowed upon us as we weave songs lovely.

  • Very gentle and delicate collab this is yet it still manages to convey a very strong and enduring bond that will be there for every and a day.

  • A sweet counterplay
    that reveals that special bond
    that unites like souls...

    M-C

  • You two have always brought out the best in each others poetry, no exception here!

    Great stuff

    Jeff

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