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Have you ever

I feel like dying
Why cant he see i love him so fucking much
Its hard to go everyday seeing him
And wishing he was mine
I hate all of this
Maybe I should die
And then see if he cares
One minute it seems like he loves me
But he always says as a friend
Help me someone
I hate this
I miss him every second
But i see him with her
And i run home and cry myself to sleep
Ive done everything for you
Ive told myself
You will never love me like i love you
But i just wont listen
Im stupid to ever think you would love me
Well you know what fuck your love
And fuck you
I hate all this
So im giving up
Im going to say goodbye
And die tonight
So heres my letter for you
Dear: The perfect one
You shut me out
And said you only loved me as a friend
When i love you more
So here today I shall die
Lets see how much you love me now
Goodbye

My poem i think its bad what do u think?

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  • MissVampire
    July 11
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    aweebirtt i love it adn lot sof ppl all been there

  • i now excactly how you feel. Just try to get threw the day you'll find love like i didSmile