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Dedicated to passions promise

you paint words with inner feeling,
you are the queen of hot and steamy,

you are the temptress of rage,
bringing hope within your page,

 

you have lived through a sad past,

and conquered your  hurt and despair,

 

when life has become shit and unfair,

you write a poem to cast out the

doubt,

 

this is what passions promise

is all about , she never loses

any clout .

 

 

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 8, 2009
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  • Amera gold member
    July 8, 2009

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    Aww... This is truly wonderful! I see it made Tory happy and it made those of us that know her happy too.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Desire gold member
    July 6, 2009
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    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!

    Oh My Word Now this drops the jaw
    Precious piece Beautiful and I imagine she will smile wide after inhaling this
    Woot!!! Loving this!

    the and unfair part had me on my knees
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    July 4, 2009

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    wonderful

    Sweet soul,
    You have penned here a wonderful dedication to this wonderful lady.
    One can see that your words have come from deep within your heart.
    Your words paint a picture of admiration, and you have been a pleasure to read.
    I wish you well in the contest with much love and hapiness too.
    ~Angel-anne~


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 3, 2009

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    SOUNDS JUST LIKE THE LOVELY & FEISTY 'PASSION'S PROMISE' to me.

    There can only be one PASSION'S PROMISE - just like there can only be on HIGHLANDER - HE! HE! - and that is just HUNKY DORY to me. You've summed her up to a T, Marilisa Baby! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this fine piece.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 3, 2009
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    Thanks love, enjoyed this piece and you

    Good luck

    Love
    Passionspromise


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 3, 2009

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    I like this dedication piece Maralisa. I also love your borders too. I am sure this writer will be so happy with this piece. Very well done. Great rhyme too.

    Wayne Leon


  • Cerulean Sunrise
    July 3, 2009
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    I like the rhymes in the beginning.
    Nicely penned for her.

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