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who am i

its a lie
all of it
who i am
who you are
people walk around me
they don't know who they are
but they know who i am
that girl
that slut
the one who lies
the one who steals
but they don't know
neither do i

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  • AwesomeJoshsome
    July 3

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    Heartfelt

    At least it seems to be full of thought... people think they know everything but the only person who really can know is yourself. Poem is great! You should add some color like the short stabbing lines though!