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Oth to Sunblock

  Sunblock oh sunblock how do you work? You keep us from burning in the hot sun rays. You can be white. Or you can be clear. No matter what color you are, you keep us white no not tan. When we go out in the sun your mothers will say, don`t forget the sunscreen. You think what if I forget the sunscreen? You`ll have to pay the price, because if you forget you`ll get burnt. So think twice before you go out on a sunny day. Did I bring the sunscreen?

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 3

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is an interesting poem I really like the way that this seems to come straight from your mind onto the page well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • Icy girl
    July 3

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    Ahh! Yea don't forget the sunscreen! Not that you burn though Good luck in your first contest!! Don't get discouraged. Remember this is your first. There will always be more. And, you are good!!!