Ancient waters that watch over me
I ask that you teach me three things to be
Teach me your calmness so i don't steam
With that clarity to see things rationally
And with great alacrity
I shall learn from you one last thing
Your great understanding
That things should just be
A contest entry
- My 1 year Allpoetry Anniversary by Lady Michaella.
660 points, ended July 24, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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mmm, this is really interesting. i think that if you are going to rhyme at the start, you should continue that throughout the poem. i love the idea behind this. great work
Thanks for entering
and best of luck in my contest!!
Your judge,
Lady Michaella
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