Swirling balls of light
illluminate my mind
calming sets of sounds
radiate through my soul
a beacon lighting my way
to solitude and serenity
a place of love and light
reflecting my inner most thoughts
cabin in the sky, so it seems
mind over matter
bringing imagination
into reality
false thoughts
become truths
as I sit and sip
my tea of tranquility
lost in thoughts
knowledge flowing
slowly into the spaces
taking me back in time
memories on pages
once left there by me
a book written for the ages
but by others never seen
read and take in
that which has always been there
this is the time
to remember...
~Lady of Flame~
Author notes
Words on paper, telling of something, that has always been there. Time to pay attention!
In a list
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memories held within those seconds held in that crux of time... some treasured...some simply remembered.
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Wonderful
Love This..The line-But by others never seen..sure can relate to that...
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Oh wow! That is just beautiful work, sis! Always do such amazing work!
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This poem has a lot of potential, but it definately needs some punctuation errors fixed. You need to separate lines in order to make the reader pause when needed and to help people understand where a sentence begins and ends. Really, this poem would go far--you just need to get it to the starting line!
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Beautiful write you have here vampira but i think you mean 'through' and not 'threw' for the last line in the first stanza. Nicely written
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Thank you for the comment and you were right. It was the middle of the night when I posted.
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